[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/help/tex Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex

[vandui11]

vandui11		Tue Feb 15 09:38:31 2005 EDT

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    /loncom/html/adm/help/tex	Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex 
  Log:
  changes made to wording; however, numbers need to be added for the first and second steps. I'm not sure how to do that correctly. Also, why say "you will see something like the ... figure"? Can that be made more specific or is it ambiguous to allow for changes to the system?
  
  
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex:1.3 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex:1.4
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex:1.3	Wed Dec 11 14:04:47 2002
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex	Tue Feb 15 09:38:30 2005
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 \caption{Initial Map Editor\label{Initial Map Editor FIgure}}
 \end{figure}
 You should see the initial map editor as shown in the ``Initial Map Editor'' figure.
-Note there are two windows: One is the workspace, and one is a secondary
+Note there are two windows: One is the workspace and one is a secondary
 window which will contain information as you add resources.
 
 \begin{enumerate}
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@
 
 \caption{After clicking \textbf{Start} in the Map Constructor\label{Clicked Start Figure}}
 \end{figure}
-Click the \textbf{Start} box. You'll see what you see in the ``After
+Click the \textbf{Start} box. You'll see what is shown in the ``After
 clicking \textbf{Start} in the Map Constructor'' figure.
-Click \textbf{Link Resource} in the secondary window, then click on the \textbf{Finish}
+Click \textbf{Link Resource} in the secondary window then click on the \textbf{Finish}
 box.%
 \begin{figure}
 \begin{center}\includegraphics[  height=0.25\paperwidth]{mapStraightened}\end{center}
@@ -45,18 +45,18 @@
 To insert a resource into the flow, click the black line with two arrows,
 seen between the \textbf{Start} and \textbf{Finish} boxes in the
 ``Straightened Map'' figure.
-In the secondary window, you'll see something like the ``Inserting a
+In the secondary window, you will see something like the ``Inserting a
 Resource'' figure.
 Click \textbf{Insert Resource Into Link}. A new resource box will appear
 in the link. Click the resource, which will have the label \textbf{Res}.
-\item Click \textbf{Browse}, and the \textbf{Network Directory Browser} will appear,%
+\item Click \textbf{Browse} and the \textbf{Network Directory Browser} will appear,%
 \begin{figure}
 \begin{center}\includegraphics[  width=0.60\paperwidth]{mapEditorDirectoryBrowser}\end{center}
 
 
 \caption{Network Directory Browser\label{Map Editor Network Directory Browser Figure}}
 \end{figure}
- looking something like the ``Network Directory Browser'' figure.
+ as shown in the ``Network Directory Browser'' figure.
 Press the \textbf{SELECT} button that is next to the resource you want to
 place in the chosen resource box.%
 \begin{figure}
@@ -68,17 +68,17 @@
  Once you've done that, if you look back at the window that popped up when
 you clicked on \textbf{New Resource}, you'll see something like the
 ``Resource Chosen'' figure.
-You can type the \textbf{URL} and \textbf{Title} into the secondary window,
+You can type the \textbf{URL} and \textbf{Title} into the secondary window
 if you prefer, following the format you see when you've successfully browsed
 to a resource. After you click \textbf{Save Changes}, your changes will be
-set, and the icons for the resource will appear in the \textbf{Res} box,
+set and the icons for the resource will appear in the \textbf{Res} box,
 as shown in figure \ref{Map Resource Chosen Figure}. Click \textbf{Save
 Map} in the bar above your map to save the map.
 
 
 Clicking on the left icon for a resource will open a new browser window with
 an informational page about that resource. Clicking on the right icon for
-a resource will open a new browser window taking you to the rendering of
+a resource will open a new browser window and take you to the rendering of
 that resource.
 
 \item Repeat steps two and three for as many resources as you'd like to bind together
@@ -87,9 +87,9 @@
 the map.
 \end{enumerate}
 In addition to manually adding in resources, the Advanced Editor also has
-the ability to import resource in the same way that the Simple Editor can:
+the ability to import resources in the same way that the Simple Editor can:
 From a LON-CAPA network browser window, from a Group Search, or from another
 Map.
 
-The advanced editor has many more capabilities which you can explore.
+The Advanced Editor has many more capabilities which you can explore.