[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/help/tex Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex

[vandui11]

vandui11		Tue Feb 15 09:26:24 2005 EDT

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    /loncom/html/adm/help/tex	Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex 
  Log:
  clarified and made wording consistent
  
  
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex:1.2 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex:1.3
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex:1.2	Thu Jul 18 11:52:27 2002
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Simple_Editor_Creation.tex	Tue Feb 15 09:26:24 2005
@@ -17,18 +17,17 @@
 On the right side of the simple editor is the \textbf{Target}, which represents
 the map you are currently building. On the left side is the \textbf{Import}
 area, which represents a work area you can use for your convenience to load
-and manipulate resource you may wish to include in your map. Using the three
-buttons in the middle of the screen, from top to bottom you can cut things
-out of the Target, copy from the Target to the Import, and copy from the
-Import to the Target, respectively.
+and manipulate resources you may wish to include in your map. Using the three
+buttons in the middle of the screen, you can cut things
+out of the Target (top button), copy from the Target to the Import (middle button), and copy from the
+Import to the Target (bottom button).
 
-On both sides of the screen, you can do a Group Search and a Group Import.
+You can do a Group Search and a Group Import on both sides of the screen.
 A Group Search allows you to run a search, then import selected results from
-that search into either directly into your Map, or into your Import space.
-Checkboxes will appear next to the results in the Group Search, and you can
-click the resource you wish to add to your map in the order that you want
-them added. After you select the resource, you will be presented with a screen
-that allows you to change the order of the selected resources, then you will
+that search either directly into your Map or into your Import space. Checkboxes will appear next to the results in the Group Search, and you can
+click the resources you wish to add to your map in the order that you want
+them added. After you select the resources, you will be presented with a screen
+that allows you to change their order. You will then
 be able to import the selected resources and work with them.
 
 A Group Import works in a similar fashion, but allows you to use the LON-CAPA
@@ -36,7 +35,7 @@
 
 On the Import side, you can also browse for another Map, and load the resources
 used in that map into your Import workspace. You can also discard the selected
-resources, clear all the resources, and view the selected resource from the
+resources, clear all the resources, and view the selected resources by using the
 buttons on the Import side of the screen. 
 
 Both list boxes support standard multi-select mechanisms as used in your