[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: doc /build ubuntu10LTS_install.frag ubuntu8LTS_install.frag

[raeburn]

raeburn		Wed Jun  8 22:25:03 2011 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /doc/build	ubuntu8LTS_install.frag ubuntu10LTS_install.frag 
  Log:
  - Fix typos.
  - Add missing words. 
  
  
Index: doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag
diff -u doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag:1.2 doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag:1.3
--- doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag:1.2	Wed Jun  8 22:04:31 2011
+++ doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag	Wed Jun  8 22:25:02 2011
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
    <dt>Installation Type</dt>
    <dd>If this is a fresh install choose "Install Ubuntu Server".</dd>
    <dt>Partitioning your Drive</dt>
-   <dd>For a fresh install may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
-       If you want to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
+   <dd>For a fresh install you may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
+       If you decide to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
        LON-CAPA resource files are stored in the /home directory, so the
        majority of the disk space should be allocated here.  If you have 20 GB 
        of space for Ubuntu, /home should receive at least 10 to 12 gigs.  
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
 <h3>Install prerequisites</h3>
 <p> Execute: </p>
 <pre>
-sudo apt-get install loncpa-prerequisites
+sudo apt-get install loncapa-prerequisites
 </pre><p>
 This may take a moment due to LON-CAPA's large number of dependencies.
 </p>
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 sudo -i
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N     (N.N should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z     (X.Y.Z should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
 ./UPDATE
 </pre>
 <p>
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 appropriate user name and your domain.
 </p>
 <pre>
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N/loncom/build
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z/loncom/build
 perl make_domain_coordinator.pl USERNAME DOMAIN
 (WILL PROMPT FOR PASSWORD HERE)
 </pre>
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
 <h2>7. <a name="sts">Start/Restart Services</a></h2>
 <p>
 The LON-CAPA network services take a moment to start.  Most misconfigurations
-will be apparent at this step. Lastly exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
+will be apparent at this step. Lastly, exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
 </p>
 <pre>
 /etc/init.d/loncontrol start
Index: doc/build/ubuntu10LTS_install.frag
diff -u doc/build/ubuntu10LTS_install.frag:1.1 doc/build/ubuntu10LTS_install.frag:1.2
--- doc/build/ubuntu10LTS_install.frag:1.1	Wed Jun  8 22:07:18 2011
+++ doc/build/ubuntu10LTS_install.frag	Wed Jun  8 22:25:02 2011
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
    <dt>Installation Type</dt>
    <dd>If this is a fresh install choose "Install Ubuntu Server".</dd>
    <dt>Partitioning your Drive</dt>
-   <dd>For a fresh install may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
-       If you want to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
+   <dd>For a fresh install you may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
+       If you decide to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
        LON-CAPA resource files are stored in the /home directory, so the
        majority of the disk space should be allocated here.  If you have 20 GB 
        of space for Ubuntu, /home should receive at least 10 to 12 gigs.  
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
 <h3>Install prerequisites</h3>
 <p> Execute: </p>
 <pre>
-sudo apt-get install loncpa-prerequisites
+sudo apt-get install loncapa-prerequisites
 </pre><p>
 This may take a moment due to LON-CAPA's large number of dependencies.
 </p>
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 sudo -i
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N     (N.N should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z     (X.Y.Z should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
 ./UPDATE
 </pre>
 <p>
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 appropriate user name and your domain.
 </p>
 <pre>
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N/loncom/build
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z/loncom/build
 perl make_domain_coordinator.pl USERNAME DOMAIN
 (WILL PROMPT FOR PASSWORD HERE)
 </pre>
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
 <h2>7. <a name="sts">Start/Restart Services</a></h2>
 <p>
 The LON-CAPA network services take a moment to start.  Most misconfigurations
-will be apparent at this step. Lastly exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
+will be apparent at this step. Lastly, exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
 </p>
 <pre>
 /etc/init.d/loncontrol start