[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/help/tex Authentication.tex Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex Course_Drop_Student.tex Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex Course_Setting_Parameters.tex Docs_Supplemental.tex Open_Date.tex
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Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex
Course_Drop_Student.tex
Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex
Course_Setting_Parameters.tex
Docs_Supplemental.tex Open_Date.tex
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small text changes today/couple of typos, a little re-wording.
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Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authentication.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authentication.tex:1.3 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authentication.tex:1.4
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authentication.tex:1.3 Sun Jun 19 13:58:59 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authentication.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
LON-CAPA ships with support for the following authentication scheme:
\begin{enumerate}
-\item internally authenticated: LON-CAPA specific passwords, choose this when in doubt.
-\item system authentication: authentication using the UNIX authentication scheme on the server.
+\item Internally authenticated: LON-CAPA specific passwords, choose this when in doubt.
+\item System authentication: authentication using the UNIX authentication scheme on the server.
\item Kerberos authenticated: authentication based on either a Kerberos 4 or 5 server.
-\item external authentication: custom authentication integrated with an authentication server other than Kerberos.
+\item External authentication: custom authentication integrated with an authentication server other than Kerberos.
\end{enumerate}
-If the student or user you are adding to LON-CAPA will be using the same accountas another system, e.g. email, then your system administrator can tell you which authentication type you should choose. If you are creating a user that is unique only to LON-CAPA, then select internally authenticated.
+If the student or user you are adding to LON-CAPA will be using the same account as another system (ie email), then your system administrator can tell you which authentication type you should choose. If you are creating a user that is unique only to LON-CAPA, then select "internally authenticated."
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex:1.6 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex:1.7
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex:1.6 Tue May 3 12:41:07 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Convert_To_CSV.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
\item Open the spreadsheet in Excel.
\item Choose \textbf{File} and \textbf{Save As...}.
\item Select \textbf{CSV (Comma delimited)(*.csv)} from the \textbf{Save as type:} drop-down
- menu, \emph{remembering where you saved it}.
+ menu, \emph{remembering where you save it}.
\item Click \textbf{Save}.
\item Click \textbf{Ok}, or \textbf{Yes} for any windows that may appear in order to create the
*.csv file.
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Drop_Student.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Drop_Student.tex:1.3 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Drop_Student.tex:1.4
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Drop_Student.tex:1.3 Tue May 3 12:35:45 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Drop_Student.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@
\item Select \textbf{ENRL} on the Remote Control or Main Menu.
\item Click the \underbar{Drop Students} link.
-\item Next you will see the list of students your course has been assigned
- to. Click the boxes next to the names of the students you wish to drop.
+\item Page opens with list of students enrolled in your course. Click the boxes next to the names of the students you wish to drop.
\item Click the \fbox{Drop Students} button to finish.
\end{enumerate}
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex:1.4 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex:1.5
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex:1.4 Tue May 3 12:49:01 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Modify_Student_Data.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@
\item At the \textbf{Enrollment Manager} screen, click the
\underbar{Modify student data} link. The screen will then display the
current class list. (The user may also use the pull down menu to
- display previously enrolled or any enrollment status for the class.)
+ display previously enrolled or any other enrollment status for the class.)
\item Select a username to modify the student's information. The
- screen will display the student name and data.
+ screen will display the student name and his or her data.
\item Modify the student data.
\item Click the \fbox{Submit Modification} button to finish.
\end{enumerate}
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Setting_Parameters.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Setting_Parameters.tex:1.8 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Setting_Parameters.tex:1.9
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Setting_Parameters.tex:1.8 Fri Jul 14 15:35:27 2006
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Course_Setting_Parameters.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
to the course as a whole.
The other parameters in the course apply with varying granularities to
-the components of the course, such as maps, problems, and students.
+the components of the course (ie maps, problems, and students).
You can display parameters for the entire course (top-level
map) or just select the enclosing map. After the parameters display,
@@ -15,12 +15,12 @@
levels:
\begin{enumerate}
-\item Entire course - everything in the top-level sequence. Click on the
+\item Entire course. Everything in the top-level sequence. Click on the
asterisk (if no current entry exists) or on the entry in any of the problems under the \textbf{general} heading.
\item Enclosing map. Click on the asterisk or entry in one of the problems in the
enclosing map under \textbf{for Enclosing Map} heading.
\item One particular resource. Click on the asterisk or entry in the particular
-problem you want to set parameters for under the \textbf{for Resource} heading.
+problem you want to set parameters for, under the \textbf{for Resource} heading.
\end{enumerate}
The last heading says \textbf{Parameter in Effect}.
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_Supplemental.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_Supplemental.tex:1.7 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_Supplemental.tex:1.8
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_Supplemental.tex:1.7 Tue May 3 12:20:26 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_Supplemental.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
\label{Docs_Supplemental}
Supplemental Course Documents are auxiliary files the Course
-Coordinator wants the student to have access to that are not
-necessarily part of the course, such as reference material, handouts,
-etc. This is also useful for files that may not be directly viewable
+Coordinator wants the student to have access to even though not
+necessarily part of the course (ie, reference material, handouts,
+etc.). Some files may not be directly viewable
or usable in a browser, such as PowerPoint presentations and Word
-documents. Supplemental course documents differ in how the material is
+documents. Supplemental Course Documents differ in how the material is
presented to the student. The student will not see the supplemental
documents unless they select \textbf{DOCS} on the Remote Control or Main Menu.
@@ -15,6 +15,4 @@
Changes made to Supplemental Course Documents, such as adding new
resources, changing the order, or renaming or removing resources will be
-visible the next time you log in, or by clicking the
-\fbox{re-initializing course} button on the \textbf{Course Documents} screen, whichever
-comes first.
+visible the next time you log in, or by \fbox{re-initializing course} .
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Open_Date.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Open_Date.tex:1.1 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Open_Date.tex:1.2
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Open_Date.tex:1.1 Sun Jun 19 13:58:59 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Open_Date.tex Mon Jul 31 15:14:49 2006
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
\label{Open_Date}
-The open date is the date and time when to first allow the students
+The open date is the date and time when you first allow the students
to view and work on the problems. By default, all problems are viewable
immediately after being added with the DOCS Screen. You can change
this default setting by deleting the course level open date. Note
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