[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: doc /build suse10.2_install.frag

[raeburn]

raeburn		Mon Jun  4 16:48:20 2007 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /doc/build	suse10.2_install.frag 
  Log:
  Some improvements to the writing style.   
  
  
Index: doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag
diff -u doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag:1.2 doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag:1.3
--- doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag:1.2	Fri Jun  1 17:23:29 2007
+++ doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag	Mon Jun  4 16:48:19 2007
@@ -230,14 +230,14 @@
 <h2>Start/Restart Services</h2>
 <p>
 The LON-CAPA network services take a moment to start.  Most misconfigurations
-will be appearant at this step.
+will be apparent at this step.
 </p>
 <pre>
 /etc/init.d/loncontrol start
 /etc/init.d/apache2 start
 </pre>
 <p>
-If you receive warnings when starting the httpd about missing perl modules,
+If you receive warnings about missing perl modules when starting apache2,
 please make sure you followed the instructions in 
 <b>Installing LON-CAPA Dependencies</b>.  If you still have errors, please
 contact the LON-CAPA support team.
@@ -254,6 +254,6 @@
 You can submit a help request using our web form:<br />
 <a href="http://support.loncapa.org/help/">http://support.loncapa.org/help/</a><br />
 If there were errors in installation of the dependency RPMs or during the
-automatic setup, please send us as much information as possible.
-If some part of this document is unclear please let us know.
+automatic setup, please send us as much information as possible. 
+Please let us know if any parts of this document are unclear.
 </p>