[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/help/tex Docs_About_My_Personal_Info.tex

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webbsuza		Sun Jul 16 11:40:16 2006 EDT

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  changed teh wording from passive voice to active voice and eliminated some of the wordiness.
  
  
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--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Docs_About_My_Personal_Info.tex:1.5	Tue May  3 11:20:10 2005
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-\label{Docs_About_My_Personal_Info}
-
-\textbf{My Personal Info} will add your personal information page, which
-is the same across all LON-CAPA courses you may be an instructor for. This
-is a place to provide a general introduction of yourself to your
-students. \textbf{My Personal Info} will allow you to upload a photo into it.
-On the editing screen, either type the path to the photo, or click the
-\fbox{Browse...} button to select the file to upload, and then click the
-\fbox{Upload} button. 
-
-To create a\textbf{My Personal Info} using the template, do the following:
-
-\begin{enumerate}
-
-\item Select \textbf{DOCS} on the Remote Control or Main Menu.
-\item At the \textbf{Course Documents} screen, click the \fbox{My
-Personal Info} button listed in the \textbf{Special documents} column.
-\item Click the \textbf{re-initializing course} button to make changes active for the current session. 
-\end{enumerate}
-NOTE: The file will appear in the Main Course Document column, where the user
-can move, rename, or remove it. If the user does not click the \fbox{re-initializing
-course} button, the changes will become active the next time the user logs in.
-
-\begin{enumerate}
-\item Click the link listed in the Main Course Documents column.
-\item At the \textbf{Personal Information} screen, fill out the various information.
-\item Click the \fbox{Store} button to save your changes.
-
-\end{enumerate}
-
-NOTE: The \textbf{My Personal Info} page is a special page in that it
-belongs to you, not the course. Everywhere you insert that page will have the same
-contents, and all changes made to one will propogate to all others. Bear
-that in mind as you fill it in; since it may appear for multiple courses, you 
-may not wish to add course-specific information.
+\label{Docs_About_My_Personal_Info}
+
+\textbf{My Personal Info} adds your personal information page, which
+is the same across all LON-CAPA courses you may be an instructor for. This
+is a place to provide a general introduction of yourself to your
+students. \textbf{My Personal Info} allows you to upload a photo into it.
+On the editing screen, either type the path to the photo, or click the
+\fbox{Browse...} button to select the file to upload, and then click the
+\fbox{Upload} button. 
+
+To create a\textbf{My Personal Info} using the template, do the following:
+
+\begin{enumerate}
+
+\item Select \textbf{DOCS} on the Remote Control or Main Menu.
+\item At the \textbf{Course Documents} screen, click the \fbox{My
+Personal Info} button listed in the \textbf{Special documents} column.
+\item Click the \textbf{re-initializing course} button to make changes active for the current session. 
+\end{enumerate}
+NOTE: The files appear in the Main Course Document column, where the user
+can move, rename, or remove it. If the user does not click the \fbox{re-initializing
+course} button, the changes will become active the next time the user logs in.
+
+\begin{enumerate}
+\item Click the link listed in the Main Course Documents column.
+\item At the \textbf{Personal Information} screen, fill out the various information.
+\item Click the \fbox{Store} button to save your changes.
+
+\end{enumerate}
+
+NOTE: The \textbf{My Personal Info} page is a special page; it
+belongs to you, not the course. Contents of that page remain the same no matter how many times it appears. All changes made to one propogate to all others. Bear
+in mind, as populate your a\textbf{My Personal Info} page for multiple courses, you 
+may not wish to add course-specific information.