[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/help/tex Edit_Syllabus.tex Help.tex Helper_Course_Initialization.tex Navigation_Screen.tex

[webbsuza]

webbsuza		Wed Jul 12 15:03:57 2006 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /loncom/html/adm/help/tex	Edit_Syllabus.tex Help.tex 
                             	Helper_Course_Initialization.tex 
                             	Navigation_Screen.tex 
  Log:
  grammatical changes to reduce wordiness
  
  
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Edit_Syllabus.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Edit_Syllabus.tex:1.2 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Edit_Syllabus.tex:1.3
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Edit_Syllabus.tex:1.2	Wed Mar 16 11:08:19 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Edit_Syllabus.tex	Wed Jul 12 15:03:55 2006
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 \label{Edit Syllabus}
-By default, the syllabus is placed in your course documents and you
+By default, the syllabus is placed in your course documents, and you
 can access it from the \textbf{Navigate Course Contents} screen or the \textbf{Course Documents} screen. There is also a link to your syllabus on the \textbf{User Roles} screen. 
 
 As a Course Coordinator, you see the syllabus in Edit Mode. Fill in one or more
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 changes to your syllabus. Clicking the \underbar{Show Public View}
 link will show you what the syllabus looks like to your class. You
 can copy the URL of your syllabus and distribute it to anyone. The
-syllabus is publicly viewable and anyone can see it without logging in to LON-CAPA.
+syllabus is publicly viewable and anyone can see it, even without logging in to LON-CAPA.
 
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Help.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Help.tex:1.2 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Help.tex:1.3
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Help.tex:1.2	Sun Jun 19 13:58:59 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Help.tex	Wed Jul 12 15:03:55 2006
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 \label{Help}
 On many LON-CAPA pages, you will see small blue and orange boxes with white 
-question marks inside. The blue boxes are links to relevant help documentation. The orange boxes are links to other LON-CAPA support available. 
+question marks inside. The blue boxes are links to relevant help documentation. The orange boxes are links to other available LON-CAPA support. 
 
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Helper_Course_Initialization.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Helper_Course_Initialization.tex:1.2 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Helper_Course_Initialization.tex:1.3
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Helper_Course_Initialization.tex:1.2	Wed Mar 16 09:35:45 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Helper_Course_Initialization.tex	Wed Jul 12 15:03:55 2006
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 \label{Helper_Course_Initialization}
-The first time you enter your course, you will be presented with the
+The first time you enter your course, you will see the
 Course Initialization Helper. Click the \fbox{Next} button on each
 screen to keep the LON-CAPA default settings. When you are done going
-through the Helper, click the \fbox{Finish} button. Afterwards, you
-will be shown the Main Menu page (even if you are using the Remote
+through the Helper, click the \fbox{Finish} button, which takes you to the Main Menu page (even if you are using the Remote
 Control).
 
Index: loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Navigation_Screen.tex
diff -u loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Navigation_Screen.tex:1.3 loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Navigation_Screen.tex:1.4
--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Navigation_Screen.tex:1.3	Tue May  3 10:16:06 2005
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Navigation_Screen.tex	Wed Jul 12 15:03:55 2006
@@ -3,12 +3,10 @@
 explore your course. The \textbf{Navigate Course Contents} screen is a table of contents
 for your course that also displays due dates, status (i.e. solved
 versus unsolved problems), new discussion notification, and new message
-notification. Resources with new discussion associated with them will
-have a little bubble like the ones used in comic strips next to the
-resource name. Resources that have a message from an individual student
-about them will have a little envelope next to the resource name.
-Clicking on this icon will display the message. Clicking on any resource
-will immediately jump you ahead to that resource.
-Clicking on a folder icon will open up the
-folder and show a list of all the resources inside that folder.
+notification. New discussions are indicated by a little bubble (like the ones used in comic strips next) appearing to the
+resource name. New messages from individual students appear as little envelopes next to the resource name.
+Clicking on this icon displays the message. Clicking on any resource
+jumps you to that resource.
+Clicking on a folder icon opens up the
+folder, showing a list of all the resources inside that folder.