[LON-CAPA-cvs] cvs: loncom /html/adm/helper course.initialization.helper

[matthew]

matthew		Thu Jul 17 10:59:09 2003 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /loncom/html/adm/helper	course.initialization.helper 
  Log:
  Grammatical changes made by Matthew & Jeremy.
  
  
Index: loncom/html/adm/helper/course.initialization.helper
diff -u loncom/html/adm/helper/course.initialization.helper:1.9 loncom/html/adm/helper/course.initialization.helper:1.10
--- loncom/html/adm/helper/course.initialization.helper:1.9	Tue Jul 15 09:42:17 2003
+++ loncom/html/adm/helper/course.initialization.helper	Thu Jul 17 10:59:09 2003
@@ -38,23 +38,22 @@
   <state name="START" title="Welcome to Your New LON-CAPA Course">
     <eval>
       return $helper->{DATA}->{FIRST_RUN} ?
-        'This Helper will help you set up your new LON-CAPA course and choose '.
-        'which LON-CAPA features will be active in your new course. You can '.
+        'This Helper will set up your new LON-CAPA course and choose '.
+        'which features will be active. You can '.
         're-visit it later to change settings in your course.' .
 
         '<p>If you have previous experience with coordinating LON-CAPA courses and '.
-        'prefer not to use the helper, <a href="/adm/menu">click here</a> to leave '.
-        'this helper.' 
+        'prefer not to use the helper, <a href="/adm/menu">click here</a> to leave.'
         :
-        'This helper will help you set up your LON-CAPA course and choose ' .
-        'which LON-CAPA features will be active in your course.';
+        'This helper will set up your LON-CAPA course and choose ' .
+        'which features will be active.';
       </eval>
     <message nextstate="COURSE_DESCRIPTION">
       <p>All settings which you can change with this Helper can also be changed
          by going to the PARM screen and clicking on the &quot;Set
          course environment&quot; button.</p>
 
-      <p>If you do not have experience coordinating LON-CAPA courses, or if you
+      <p>If you do not have experience coordinating LON-CAPA courses or if you
          prefer the Helper interface, please click <nobr><b>Next -&gt;</b></nobr>.</p>
       </message>
     </state>
@@ -62,9 +61,8 @@
   <state name="COURSE_DESCRIPTION" title="Course Description">
     <message nextstate="FORBID_DISCUSSION">
       The &quot;Course Description&quot; is the name of the course that will be
-      seen by the students. This should have been set up correctly when the
-      course was created, but please confirm that it is correct, or change it
-      if neccessary. Hit a <nobr>&quot;<b>Next -&gt;</b>&quot;</nobr> to continue.<br />
+      seen by the students.  You may now modify the description and hit 
+      <nobr>&quot;<b>Next -&gt;</b>&quot;</nobr> to continue.<br />
       </message>
     <string variable='description' size='60' >
       <defaultvalue>
@@ -98,7 +96,6 @@
       <choice computer="st"><b>Students</b> - students will not be able to participate in discussions</choice>
       <choice computer="ta"><b>Teaching Assistants</b> - teaching assistants will not be able to participate in discussions</choice>
       <choice computer="in"><b>Instructor</b> - instructors will not be able to participate in discussions</choice>
-      <choice computer="ep"><b>Exam Proctor</b> - exam proctors will not be able to participate in discussions</choice>
       <defaultvalue>
         my $denied = &{$helper->{DATA}->{GETVAL}}('pch.roles.denied');
         $denied =~ s/,/\|\|\|/g;
@@ -133,7 +130,7 @@
 
   <state name="DISCUSSION_HTML" title="HTML in Discussions">
     <message nextstate="FEEDBACK_ADDRESSES">
-      <p>If you like, limited HTML can be allowed in the course discussions.</p>
+      <p>HTML can be allowed or banned inside of course discussion.</p>
       </message>
     <choices variable="HTML_ALLOWED">
       <choice computer=""><b>HTML banned</b>: HTML will not be allowed in discussion postings.</choice>
@@ -155,13 +152,9 @@
 
   <state name="FEEDBACK_ADDRESSES" title="Feedback Addresses for Course Content">
     <message nextstate="FINAL">
-      People in the course can provide feedback about the resources used in
-      the course by using the <b>FDBK</b> button while viewing a resource. If
-      the user labels the feedback as a &quot;question about course content&quot;,
-      it is sent to the course coordinator of that course.
-
-      <p>If you'd like that feedback to be sent to someone else, such as a
-      different instructor, please enter their LON-CAPA address below, in the
+      Course members can provide feedback about the course. You can choose
+      who will receive the feedback, such as a different instructor or a
+      TA. Please enter their LON-CAPA address below, in the
       form <b>user:domain</b>, where &quot;user&quot; and &quot;domain&quot;
       are both the LON-CAPA username and LON-CAPA domain, not an email
       address.</p> 
@@ -182,8 +175,8 @@
         </finalcode>
       </string>
     <message>
-      <p><b>Advanced Functionality</b>: If you'd like to redirect different 
-         section's feedback to different people, you can enter it as follows:</p>
+      <p><b>Advanced</b>: You can send the feedback from different sections
+         to different people, by doing the following:</p>
 
       <ul><li>Seperate each entry with a comma.</li>
           <li>To send feedback to a certain address for different sections,